Sunday, 13 March 2016

Popcorn

Popcorn
Popcorn is a delicious food, the popcorn flies up in the sky like a cannon and shoots like a big delicious bullet. Popcorn is like a red volcano and just pop like lava when it goes into people's mouths. It tastes like cheese popcorn. when I'm 6 years old I like eating popcorn and it is become my favourite food. I can  see that it's really yummy,too eat.



4 comments:

  1. I love it but I would like it if it was longer.

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  2. "the popcorn flies up in the sky like a cannon and shoots like a big delicious bullet." Matthew 0 I really enjoyed how you used these words to describe how the popcorn came out of the machine - Kiri

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  3. Matthew i like the fact that you're saying "the popcorn flies up in the sky like a cannon and shoots like a big delicious bullet."

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  4. I really like the part "the pop corn flies in the sky like a cannon and shoots like a big delicious bullet" It also gives me a good image in my head.
    Lulu:)

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